Bottle of Sin

Wow-that was just amzing. I loved the rhymes and well I loved all of it!!! Great job on this!!

Thank you all for your comments.

I did not expect many people to agree with the logic behind it, but afterall it's just one more point of view.

To be honest, I'm a little surprised that it got as high of a rating as it did. Thanks again to all!

Hey,
Cool poem, it had a really weird topic, but I liked it. Michelles right, it's pretty cynical, but true. The last line always seems to rhyme a little awkwardly. Just trying to help, keep writing.
Love,

-Blue

Good poem.. you did a good job. Keep writing!

~Grace

Hi! It is a bit cynical but true as well, much of it...people do tend to just aquire aquire, what more can I get??? And we can't take any of it with us in the end...for myself, as long as I'm happy that's all I care not what I have..thx for the comment on my poem as well, will read the rest of your that I've missed later this weekend..I enjoyed this one..Michelle :) (and Craig!)