Fall

by vanessarrr   Jul 25, 2004


The sun floats still

On a late September.

The breeze stays calm,

Swaying leaves like feathers.

The birds rise up

For their morning stroll.

The trees, like chocolate,

Announces, "It's Fall!"

The grass, green than ever

Soaks deep in morning dew.

The trees, once green,

Now bronze, lay askew.

The sweet smell of Fall

Tickles every little nose,

Presenting this season

As pretty as a rose.

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  • 17 years ago

    by Tom Swart

    I really like poems about nature and this one is no exception. I find that the Nature section of Poems and Quotes is where some of the best poems are found. I like writing Love poems and find that I incorporate many nature themes into them. There are a lot of poems in the Love section but there are only a few that really shine where in the nature section I find the opposite. Most of them are very good. I enjoyed your poem and hope to read more from you in the future. If you like trees you can read a poem I wrote called The memory of my shadow. The poem Searching also has a nature theme - I wrote this way too long ago when I was a kid and have thought many times to rewrite it as an adult. But somethings are better left the way they are no matter how badly you wish to change them.

  • 19 years ago

    by Abbie

    aw this poems so cute you can almost feel the fall coming!!! its great! keep writing x

  • 19 years ago

    by Lindsay

    Nicely done! I agree with Barb. It did paint a piture of Fall in my mind. Great!

  • 19 years ago

    by Baby B

    aww i love it. I can almost feel fall. Great job.

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