I lost you

by Walter F Alvarado   Jul 31, 2004


I always thought you where a pretty good girl.
You made me laugh when I was sad.
You brought me up when I felt low.

Over the years I started to like you more and more.
Until a point came and I said no more.
I tried to tell you how I felt , but my mouth froze everytime.
One day I was definitely going to tell you.
but i found out it was too late, you died in a car accident the night before.
The day they buried you, they buried a part of me that loved you and still does.

*I don't know where you are, but I know your somewhere up there, God bless you, and don't forget I miss you*

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  • 19 years ago

    by heather

    gr8 job and i am sorry 4 ur loss i am 4 ever ur friend and when ever u need one i am here g2g luv heather

  • 19 years ago

    by Kelsey

    This was my favorite poem of yours! I loved it! keep it up!!

  • 19 years ago

    by Brittany

    hey i loved this one. its really sad and i am sorry this happened. i know what it's like to lose somone u love.. its not easy!
    love britt

  • 19 years ago

    by Angie Lopez

    I really loved this poem it was so sad and it made me cry. I know you'll never forget this but I really hope that one day life will get better.

  • 19 years ago

    by Sean Allen

    Hey I liked this poem. It is supposed to be "were" not "where" on the first line of the poem. I think that this poem can be improved though. You can speak a bit more about your feelings, and the whole car incident. I know this is a personally meaningful topic, so if you decide not to change the poem, that is fine.

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