Sedated by Death

by Broken   Aug 3, 2004


The way she sees it, there's no reason to live, she might as well quit.

So alone she sits, surrounded by blood, pouring from her wrists.

Slowly slipping away, from her self-claimed hell, her life has gone astray.

She has rung death's bell, hopefully he'll come soon, and take her to the gates of hell.

Maybe it'll be better this way, no more pain to bare, never living another day.

All she wants is to forget, everything about you, and live without any regrets.

But for heaven's sake, her biggest regret is you, you're her worst mistake.

You caused this, with your twisted love, her pain you could not miss.

Her light is faded, Death has finally arrived, and she's been sedated.

Now she can rest, with her broken heart, as an everlasting crest.

*yeah...i don't know why i wrote this or when...i found it a few days ago...i thought it was pretty good...its not about anyone in particular...so...please comment*

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  • 19 years ago

    by Ian Robert

    good job

  • 19 years ago

    by LeAnNe

    Awesome poem, you did a great job writing it!
    *two thumbs up*
    -Leanne-
    p.s. If you could check out some of my stuff, I'd really appreciate it! Thanks!

  • wow really good poem, I like it a lot..
    its deffinatley a 5
    Keep it up^_^

    Shannon

  • 19 years ago

    by Andrea

    i could feel the pain in this one...

  • 19 years ago

    by Not Bulletproof

    wow, you're right, that's brilliant writing! you're amazing doll, keep writing <333
    -Mortalidaga
    xxxx take care