by Sean Allen Aug 4, 2004
category :
Dark, fantasy /
fantasy, mystical
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So I sang my song |
by Sondos
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You know how much i love this myth and you told it so beautifully well done |
by FTS Miles
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Very nice poetic retelling of Orpheus... always a wonderful tragedy. With the possible exception of the last stanza, you wove your tone excellently throughout. |
by Danielle
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That was awesome. Very well written. |
by Kevin J
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Very cool write:) dream-like |
by Aken Sol
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Heh, well you certainly hae enough praise so i'll provide the criticism. Everything flows and rhmes great except near the end becase 'end' and 'and' doesn't ryhme very much. and... well that's about it. |