Till The Very End

by DMG   Aug 5, 2004


Left in the dark, no one around.
Cold coats my body, blackness surrounds.
Loneliness, my new best friend.
Together by myself, till the very end.

Left alone, with my heart shredded.
Walls closing in, my mind embedded.
Saddened hurt, my new best friend.
Together in pain, till the very end.

Left in pain, emotions turning blue.
Feeling lifeless, suicidal too.
Depression, my new best friend.
Together alone, till the very end.

Left depressed, a white light shines.
For years now I've seen the signs.
Little knife, my new best friend.
Just seconds away from the very end.

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  • 19 years ago

    by Aken Sol

    The vibes of depression are so strong in this poem... I'm suprised you've only recently wrote poetry. Keep it up, you have untapped talent/
    Aken Sol

  • 19 years ago

    by SilentSymphony

    I dont say this a lot, but it was Awsome. Verry well worded. And i could see everything you were expressing in the poem. :)

    -Courtney-

  • 19 years ago

    by HOLLY ARMER

    That was amazing! You conveyed such sadness and despair!

  • 19 years ago

    by TAinted vįŕťues

    Man that was awesome one of those poems u cud read a 100 times yet still want to read it more

  • 19 years ago

    by Shona

    that was so fantastic, great work :) keep writing

    mwa xoxox