Letter From the Womb

by Perfectly Unperfect   Aug 17, 2004


I've done nothing to harm you
It was all your choice
Why don't you deal with the consequences?
Why don't you hear my voice?

Mommy, I still love you
Even with that thought in your head
But how will I ever tell you
If before I am born, I am dead?

Maybe I will be a doctor
Maybe I will help save the world
But how will you know if you don't give me a chance?
How will you know if I'm killed?

I don't want to be an abortion baby
I want to go live my life
Just because it's legal
Does not mean it's right

So I guess you've decided, Mommy
But you have good reason, of course
The marriage isn't going too well right now
And babies just don't go good with divorce

Mommy, I don't blame you
You wouldn't know that with love for you I am filled
But at least I know that if I could tell you somehow
There's no way you would have me killed.

**I know this is a really controvercial issue that easily offends people, but please save the comments about how you didn't know that there are pens in the womb and so forth because that's just immature and annoying. You do not have to share my views in any way but this is MY poetry and I will write about MY feelings. I also know that not everything is black and white so if you would like to share your views in a comment go right ahead, I really would love to hear them. Just please be mature about it because I can guarentee your point will not get across if you act like a child.**

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  • 19 years ago

    by Kristin

    I think you did a really good job on this poem and i hope people read it and think about what there doin before they abort there child i have a daughter and shes going to be 2 this weekend and im not married to her father and im still doin fine on my own i dont think its fair that some many people can say *Oops made a mistake lets get out of it* for every mistake there is consequences and i think everyone will pay in the end...good job on your poem and keep writin:)

  • 19 years ago

    by Natalie84

    I was reading some of the comments and the first one on here says why would you give your baby up when there's enough unwanted kids out there. There are a lot of children with out homes but if you knew what you were talking about you would know that there are NO infants with out homes. There is a waiting list a couple years long for people waiting to get infants. SO many people can not have babies so they go to an adobtion agency and get put on a long list. Please you must know what you are saying before you just make your self look foolish.

  • 19 years ago

    by Natalie84

    I am very much against abortion. Ever since I was a little girl and old enough to understand I hated it. When I was about 9 my sister had an abortion she was 14 and I hated her for the longest time. I couldn't understand how someone could do that. And now they have the partial abortion where they kill the baby full term right before it comes out. How stupid!! Anyway I really liked your poem. Very good job!

  • 19 years ago

    by Stephanie

    hey
    i really like your poem! it soo good.. i think it is important for people to understand the importance of life- as Marissa T said. i learned this form my uncle once- Abortions a life... not a choice! **and i totally agree w/ it** and that's sorta like your poem- i really like it

  • 19 years ago

    by Marissa T

    i believed in fixing mistakes, but i had a miscarriage when i turned 15 and it changed my life. i was so sad i never even got to tell it that i was sorry that it died bcuz i hadnt known, and was doing drugs which ended up killing it. i think that 4 months means nothing...it has a heartbeat after a couple of days, it has a soul and a destiny and we just throw it away without taking into consideration how much damage were really doing. im glad you have written this, everyone should understand the importance of a life.

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