M.U.T.E

this is great.. i love this poem.. your an amazing poet keep up the good work cause I love your stuff

The fourth line, first stanza needs to be change, it looks forced. (I should talk) hehe
As for the rest of the poem, this is a masterpeice, and it should be the P&Q anthem.

4th Stanza is incredibly clever. I love great endings.

Yeah one poet to another i totally felt that - i know how it feels when people bag your sh!t...its like stomping ontop of your most inner thoughts, your heart and soul - dont worry unless they have something constructive to say FARK it!!! Keep ya head up for real i think your wonderful!! Xoxo Eirisa

Haha, for some reason I really liked the "helped not", its like you screwed up that sentence (because people don't say that often) for the rhyme, but then again, its just so freakin fun to say that iono... I wish the last line had an "are" in it, but that would mess it up in its own way I think, so never mind, good stuff!

Yes!! 'tis good!!!