Deception And Me

intresting poem it was actually quite good i liked it keep up the good work

that was intresting but it seemed something was missing I could guess but oh well good read please continue to do well

I LOVED THIS PIECE Kevin!! As per usual its up to your immaculate standard as i now expect from a write with talent such you.....i coul totally relate to every line - this poem was sooooo unique and original and i can't believe its rating - its definetly worth alot more than this and hopefully the well deserved 5 i gave you helps improve that rating!

Much luv Eirisa

Thanx for all the comments everybody as always

Yea, it's kind of cool that it confused you vlad ..lol...that's part of the point. It's kinda what's going on in head when I dont want to share how I really feel with certain ppl. I'm talking to myself in my head:p. I turned deception into a seperate personality because it actually is when I think about it. I/We become someone else when I/we lie. I thought of making some kind of mark whenever deception (inner voice)spoke to seperate Me from Him, but just like the examples in the poem, I thought it would be cool if the reader couldn't tell the difference between the 2 either;)

Yo, never read you before and that was excellent, like a reas issue handled with blunbt honesty and not a whiff of self indulgence....bold effort badge to you.