When I Die

by vanessarrr   Aug 22, 2004


When I die
My whole life
Would flash before me
Or so they say...

When I die
My mistakes
I'll regret even more
Whilst I fade away...

When I die
I will miss
Everything I loved
Everything I treasured...

When I die
I'll let go
Of all the emotions
All things I endured...

When I die
A soul will rise
To heaven I hope
Or I'll burn down there...

When I die
A tear will fall
From someone alive
Someone who cared...

When I die
I'll cry and cry
Until I breathe
The last one for the day...

When I die
I'm forever gone
Leaving you behind
Or so they say...

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  • 19 years ago

    by Shædow Poet

    I liked the way you've made a poem about all the fiction that have been said about death... if you know what I mean ;) well done on the poem!

  • 19 years ago

    by Allen

    Nice write, its simple and easy to read, very effective :) Very interesting rhyming style, sometimes it feels like it doesn't rhyme but the flow is still great :) Love your work as always :) take care.

  • 19 years ago

    by julie

    now that is a great poem, you know for a 13 yr old you have a hell of a lot of talent.

  • 19 years ago

    by beaver

    REALLY LIKED THIS, WELL DONE.

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