Just Look Into My Eyes.

by Unseen Exposure   Aug 23, 2004


If you just looked into my eyes,
There's a lot that you would see,
Everything I'm feeling,
Reflecting back at me.

If you reached into my heart,
You might actually feel the pain,
How it's locked up without a key,
Trapped within the chains.

If you hacked inside my mind,
You'd find secrets you never knew,
Things that are so shocking,
You wouldn't think them true.

If by chance you caught a tear,
Invisible to the eye,
And you held it close enough,
You'd see the reasons why.

Just look into my mirror,
You'd see a stained reflection,
With an abused conscious and mind,
And a distorted complexion.

If you lived inside my world,
You'd know I'm dead inside,
You'd see everything I've felt,
And know all the places I hide.

If you felt inside my soul,
You'd wonder why I still believe,
After everything that's happened,
How badly I've been deceived.

Just look into my eyes,
This fake me would disappear,
A new person you would find,
That for so long, has just wanted to appear.

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  • 19 years ago

    by Jamie

    again, i'm speechless...you are an amazign writer, unlike me, each of your new pooems are different and yet so good...

  • 19 years ago

    by Victoria

    Your poem is vvonderful. I love it! Excellent work :) Keep writing.

  • 19 years ago

    by JS

    Amazing. i don't even know how else to put it. You took my exact feelings and put them into beatiful words. Keep it up. you have obvious talent!

  • 19 years ago

    by *Elizabeth*

    This poem was soo AMAZING!!! WOW!!! i loved this line
    "If by chance you caught a tear,
    Invisible to the eye,
    And you held it close enough,
    You'd see the reasons why"

    SOoo beautiful!!!! woowwww...

  • 19 years ago

    by Robyn Park

    Let me just say AMAZING! That poem was so well written, and I can relate to it. You worded it exactly right, and it had so much emotion in it. I loved it. Kudos