Suddenly.

by beaver   Aug 29, 2004


Suddenly you were gone,
Leaving me to go on,
No goodbye,
No reason why,
You just packed your bags,
A few old rags,
Leaving me on my own,
In the place we called home,
To live my life,
No longer your wife,
The children and me,
Once four, now three,
There is no reason or rhyme,
Will you come back in time,
It cant be forever,
we were destined to be together,
I pray and I hope,
Its all a big joke,

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  • 19 years ago

    by FireCracker

    awesome job wit this one, ur an awesome write, TNHX for ur comments on my poems .. ! LoL !

  • 19 years ago

    by alexander

    Very sad but very good keep on writing

  • 19 years ago

    by Jacki

    the grass is never greener on the other side. He doesn't reilze what he is missing out on. The poem itself was beautiful you worded that so nicely. Its also very sad. I hope this isn't true to you :(
    btw thank you for commenting on my poem a fairys world :)

  • 19 years ago

    by Sherry Lynn

    Wow, nicely said. I can feel the pain, hope, and yet desperation all at once, good job.

    --Sher

  • 19 years ago

    by Brooklyn

    Sometimes men don't see what they are leaving behind.

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