This house is too quiet

by Timothy   Sep 4, 2004


This house is too quiet,
And everything seems so still;
It seems too large,
But my soul feels about nil.

I can't go on without her,
Life has no meaning with her absence;
The ghosts that reside here now,
Mar me with their presence.

This house is very cold,
I do not have her arms around me to warm my bones;
I can't make myself do much of anything,
But sit here and cry and moan.

She was so self-sacrificing,
Right to the end;
Taking a bullet during a robbery,
When it was the clerk she was trying to defend.

Christmas was yesterday, our favorite day together,
But I did not celebrate it this year, because I had no will;
This house is too quiet,
And everything seems so still.

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  • 19 years ago

    by Timothy

    "sad" is my middle name!

  • 19 years ago

    by jamie25

    this was awesome...perfectly sad and depressing lol

  • 19 years ago

    by ~:.GodeSsOfTemPtati0n.:~

    sd... but very well written... i like everything in it... such a wonderful piece right here... keep on writing...hope u pass by mine sometimes =) ciao

  • 19 years ago

    by Timothy

    Yeah! I'm in the top five in a couple spots. About time. Anyone know how I can get more coverage? Doesn't seem like a lot of peeps see my poems.

  • 19 years ago

    by Timothy

    Thank you one and all for the nice comments.