Countess Elizabeth Báthory

by Jacki   Sep 8, 2004


What's it like to bathe in a
Young women's blood?
The blood of a young virgin?
Does it make you skin
Soft and shinny?
Or so I heard it was the
Anti-wrinkling method.
Does it make your hair
Feel like silk?
Come on Countess Tell me.
Let me in on your secret.
Elizabeth Báthory, I've
Read so much about you.
I've been told your story
Is one of the most nutrias in history.
They said so many things,
Could they all be so true?
When your husband went
Away you let your body stray.
Giving into the men
Letting them taste the
Nobles skin.
But something went wrong Elizabeth,
Did you just go mad?
Those poor girls, your servants.
They all ended up dead.
I know about the hot irons
That you placed upon there face.
I know about the torturing
How gruesome the deaths
Were.
I read there were something like
650 women dead and killed?
Is this true Countess?
Then when you hacked them up
And wanted to get rid of the bodies,
Jesus, Elizabeth you fed the women
To your soldiers.
What was going through your head?
Soon you became sloppy.
Throwing the corpse out your carriage.
Hoping that they would just rot
And be eating by the animals.
But the help was getting expensive.
Why were all your female servants
Missing?
Oh Elizabeth once so clever
Know I hear your downfall in the wind.
So in theory I think I have it figured it out.
Countess Elizabeth have you ever heard that
heterosexual males murder women,
Homosexual males murder men,
Elizabeth my friend you murdered women.
See now the pieces fit together.
You weren't looking to please you husband.
To keep yourself beautiful for him.
Oh hell no
You were a lesbian looking for a little
Guilty pleasure.
Now the story all comes together.

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  • 19 years ago

    by Jacki

    Thank You :)

  • 19 years ago

    by Madison

    WOW I LOVED THE POEM! and indeed i checked out the story, it was really interesting! i liked it alot, and i thought it was cool how you coiuld write a poem about it! way to go!!!

  • 19 years ago

    by TrUtH hUrTs

    kewl!!

  • 19 years ago

    by Jacki

    Timothy,
    THis story is under crime libary Sexual Preditars here is a part of the story why I used the lesbian part, and why she had a guilty pleasure. I have the weblink under the very fist comment so you can read the full story of her.

    One of the most striking, and troubling, things about this real-life horror story is its female-on-female character. All the murder victims were female. Most of the guilty, whether as procurers or torturers, were also women. That women were the procurers may be explained on practical grounds: in a sex-segregated world: women are more likely to mingle freely with each other and trust an offer of employment or hospitality from another woman.

    Men did play parts in this tragedy. One torturer, a dwarf nicknamed Ficzkó, was male. Other men served as means to humiliate women (who were forced to parade nude in their presence) or to degrade them after death (soldiers who had no idea what they were eating were fed flesh of murdered females).

    We cannot know what the feelings were of the men who watched peasant women forced to strip: they may have enjoyed this sadistic show but, then again, they may have been appalled but helpless to do anything about it. If the latter, they must be considered Báthory's victims as well. The men who were tricked into cannibalism were unequivocally victims. It is noteworthy, however, that she had no male murder victims.

    How did Báthory get away with waging a femicide for over three decades? The deaths of enough women to populate a village could not have been a complete secret--and, indeed, it was not. What's more, many women and girls survived with faces and palms displaying the evidence of her cruelty.

    To understand why Báthory got away with her crimes for as long as she did, we need to understand the position of peasants in her country at the time as well as the privileges accorded high birth. There had been a Hungarian peasant uprising in 1524, a generation before the Countess's birth. It had been crushed and the rebels subjected to truly diabolical punishments. Their leader was "roasted alive on an iron throne and his followers forced to eat his flesh before they themselves were broken on the wheel and hanged." (McNally)

  • 19 years ago

    by Timothy

    Wow, James Daren Starr, you are long-winded (nimble-fingered?) boy!
    Oh yeah, this is Jacki's comment section! Most of what you wrote about Elizabeth Bathory seemed accurate, except that I have never read anywhere that she was a lesbian. Remember: Not ALL serial killers involve sex in their crimes. Think of the SON OF SAM.