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by Chasityy   Sep 9, 2004


I want there to catch Ur fall
I wasn't there to give you a call
I wasn't there to say stop
I wasn't there with you at the top

I hate you laying there
so cold and trapped
circled by wires and cords like that
I hate you're there
with your line about to go flat
I hate that your smiling face
Now fade slowly away....

The smile on your face
The twinkle in your eye
seems to have gone away

I wasn't there to catch your fall
I wasn't there to give you a call
I wasn't there to say stop
I wasn't there with you at the top

I hate that you're laying there
But most of all i hate myself

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  • 19 years ago

    by Chasityy

    thanx

  • 19 years ago

    by Likke.a.demon!

    I agree with every1..but I liked it more!! LOLZ ^-^

  • 19 years ago

    by Chasityy

    thanks robert!

  • 19 years ago

    by Robert

    With time your work will really expand through life it usally does just keep on plugging away at it. It was good but kinda choppy at th end

  • 19 years ago

    by Chasityy

    thanks!