Alone, I'm With You ®

by Sarah   Sep 13, 2004


Together we sit and listen to the night.
I wonder what may be in your head.
My heart you seem to have misplaced sometime back.

Now the pain in my soul I keep out of sight.
The anger I feel, I often see RED!
Days of uncertainty we surely could track.

Do you think our life you might want to make right?
Complete my being and come to bed.
The pieces of my heart that I know I lack.

Wishing you'd make my heart take flight.
Wanting you to listen to the words I have said.
Thinking that the lines on my soul are going to crack.

Alone, I'm with you...

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  • 19 years ago

    by Shædow Poet

    Interesting, I have never seen someone use that rhyming scheme, very unique (I love reading uniquely written poems). Definetely kept my attention, you did well!

  • 19 years ago

    by PnQ Mod Account

    this is very good! I know where you are coming from..it's a sad existence to be "alone with someone"

    Very nicely written, I love the abc abc... rhyme scheme!

  • 19 years ago

    by vanessarrr

    nice and short. i liked the structure and rhyming of the poem. yeah, love is so unpredictable sometimes. take care:)

  • 19 years ago

    by Saravana Kumar S

    Good poem.Love does so many things that is always hard to understand...

  • 19 years ago

    by Andrea

    ooh anger and sadness mixed together...lovely combination. this poem is good.

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