Dark Coating

by Sean Allen   Sep 19, 2004


Life-stars:
burning the sky
with immaculate fury.

Light Scars:
shaping my hand
with symphonic beauty.

Take it all away.
Take it all away.

Bright tar:
coating us all
with tormented songs
of a final goodbye.

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  • 19 years ago

    by Lance Hardy

    You lost me on this one. I need an explanation too.

  • 19 years ago

    by Kevin J

    Your writes are like riddles...i like that. They are always short, but chock-full-O meaning...unclear or debatable meaning. I like the contrast of Light and Dark. My translation is: Light depicts the beginning of life while dark represents the end. I think "light scars" is the grey area in between *our lives*. Beginning middle and end.

    I'm probably waaaay off, but it was nice getting in your head..lol

    Nice write;)

  • 19 years ago

    by Aken Sol

    Uhhhhh..... whoa.
    mind-blowing kinda?
    Explaination please?

  • 19 years ago

    by Sammie Moore

    wow, thats really cool!

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