Cant take it anymore!

by Erin   Sep 22, 2004


She thinks she found her home.. Cutting herself in her bathroom all alone.. No ones home.. So she takes a knife and starts slicing her wrist from left to right..She wants to get the pain away.. this is what it's like almost every day..Miserable heart broken with nothing to say..Shes bleeding all over.. she falls to the floor.. Looks like she can't take it anymore!

Short poem I know just tell me what you think!

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  • 19 years ago

    by Erin

    Thanks for the advice ill do that

  • 19 years ago

    by Andrea

    another good one. but i think you could make it a little longer to create a more vivid poem.