What You've Done ...

by Unseen Exposure   Sep 23, 2004


I totally couldn't think of a title...

Your blunt comments and predictions,
Are driving me so insane,
You pretend you know me oh so well,
But you don't know about my pain,

You speak to me in stupid riddles,
You haven't been here in so long,
I've needed you, cried out for you,
But I was determined to stay strong,

You abused my thoughts and feelings,
And you've mocked my every word,
Acting like you understood me,
Faking statements that you heard,

You broke down all my syllables,
And transformed their definitions,
Thinking somehow it would help,
You had an "instinctive premonition",

Just yesterday you blew me off,
And tried to tell me what I needed,
But you were wrong, you know it,
I guess you're selfish and conceited,

You told me I should be positive,
Because you're another one who's left,
Tell me where there's good in that,
It doesn't make any sense,

You pretend to be so mighty,
Said you'd try your best to just be there,
Where were you when I called out?
You looked past me and didn't care,

I thought I saw some good in you,
But you'd rather I just forget,
I'm glad you're fine and happy now,
But what about me? I'm upset,

So what am I supposed to do now?
Should I just "Move on this time"?
I'm scared, alone, hurt, and broken,
I've been this way forever
And I won't ever "be just fine"

^ Angry.

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  • 19 years ago

    by Annie

    Oh wow...I can really relate to that one. You're going on my favorites list, girl! Hehe. Keep writing, you have talent!

  • 19 years ago

    by Ann Stareyes

    Just amazing, Great job! lol

  • 19 years ago

    by The Plain Truth

    This was a really amazing poem, despite the sadness. I think your title is just fine, it's the poem that matters, but, I was thinking maybe something along the lines of Ignorance...nicely done. Lots of love.

    xxx Megan §