Whippoorwill

by Timothy   Sep 25, 2004


Laying within our tee pees, feeling full of dread,
My sister and I remember the words the Chieftain said;
A great battle would begin the following morrow,
But we fear that by sundown the Sioux would bring the Omaha people much sorrow.

My mother has cried all this day, attempting to hide her tears in her chores,
But as I worked with her in the fields, there was something I learned I abhorred;
The "honor" my older brother and my father hold so dear,
Has brought upon the women of the village a mortal fear.

Tonight, that agony has been amplified,
Because in a vision I saw many wounded, and many died;
My brother and father, would fall without a single enemy kill,
This vision brought to me, this evening, courtesy of the repetitious call of the whippoorwill.

(footnote: The Omaha people have a superstitious belief that the whippoorwill's repeating call is a harbinger of death.)

0


Did You Like This Poem?

Latest Comments

  • 19 years ago

    by Timothy

    Thank you for the nice comments, people. Meena:
    The footnote about believing the birds cry if repeated is a sign of death is true, and the Omaha people did war with the Souix, but the rest is just a story based on facts.
    Jacki: Thanks for the comments, but the person telling the story is a girl. You prob don't know, but it talks about working in the field, and although the men turned the soil preparing, the women always planted.

  • 19 years ago

    by don mohr

    Very good-very good!

  • 19 years ago

    by Jacki

    hmm intrestesting poem. I really enjoyed it. I liked the fact that the he forseen what was coming, I liked the whole story behind it. I really thought this was wrote great and havn't read anything quiet like it. Great Job.