Dancing Rain
by Aken Sol Sep 30, 2004
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Fireworks of color |
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19 years ago
by DMG
nice kracky
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19 years ago
by vanessarrr
does 'fire' have 2 syllables? i didn't think so, does it? i think it's perfect. yep, so pretty descriptions. take care:)
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19 years ago
by Sean Allen
I liked it, but your first line has one too many syllables.
