Shin

Shin = death?
Superb poem, ambiguous but very...pretty~¿
I can't think of a more fitting adjective for it, it's very pretty, albeit in a morbid sort of sense.
5/5, great job!

Regardless of all the above comments, I thought this piece was wonderful. It seemed very sad, and it was like a window into a larger story. the poem was set in the present, but leaft questions about the past.
I really liked it!

Wow, greatly written dark poem, with excellently created atmosphere in it. I like it from the beginning to the end, but my favorite stanza is:

-I don't recall when I became a
hollow shell
People would keep taking parts of my
heart and soul.
No one tried giving anything back.-

Very powerful piece, so effective.
5/5 from me

Hmmm... I don't really understand this poem, but perhaps you could explain it to me more. You don't have to, only if you want to. Either in comment on this poem or a PM, either is good :D.
I look forward to reading other poems by you in the future :D.

With all due respect,
Hatori
The Illusionist

No offense taken =).

I think discussion is important and often left out.