When I call

by Rachael/7MidniteTears   Oct 5, 2004


When i call
no answer
my throat hurts
its a disaster

when i call
he is not near
when i am afraid
he is not here

when i call
he turns away
i think he cares
he just makes my world grey

when i call
i don't feel free
where are you now?
When i call......will he answer me

    report violation
0


Did You Like This Poem?

Latest Comments

  • 19 years ago

    by Allen

    Hmm... sometimes I wonder the same thing, I get the same feeling as what you have written... nice poem, I can relate to it some what easily :) keep up the good writing.

  • 19 years ago

    by Felicia Tursi

    Nice poem and i got mad because danw is my best friend but i'm still not going to apologize!

  • 19 years ago

    by dawn

    Hi,I dont want there to be any tention between us. I offered my opinion.I'm not going to apologize for that.As for Felicia.She didnt mean anything mean.If I did hurt you.I'm terribly sorry.

  • 19 years ago

    by Andrea

    good poem

Read All Comments (4)

More Poems By Rachael/7MidniteTears