Secret

by Lexi Lou   Oct 7, 2004


I write the name i dare not speak
every day of the week
the hair on my neck stands up
when the subject of you comes up
around you my heart beats around
and my eyes cant focus on the ground
i lose my head and play a fool
but forget the fool, you like madam cool
your eyes an ocean waiting to be swam
when can i grab my floaties and jump in?
your face reflects the sun and the light
just thinking of you makes me feel alright
so i keep to myself the secret of my day
hoping that these feelings will fade away
what do i do? I'm falling for you
this cant be right...but its true

    report violation
0


Did You Like This Poem?

Latest Comments

  • 19 years ago

    by [{•×Natasha•×}]

    excellent poem i must say.........u also 2 hve ur way with wrds .....well dune keep up the excellent wrk xx

    luv *X~TaShA ~X*
    tke care xxx

  • 19 years ago

    by Aymon F

    awesome. the rhyming is very well done, whether it was intended or not, haha, tres bien. another 5 from me, keep it up

  • 19 years ago

    by Jacki

    what a great poem. Something every girl or guy goes through. Yes i've been there writing that special guys name over and over on a pad of paper sitting in class. Wanting him to know but he likes the other girl so his name is left on the pad, and never spoken. What a great way of wording this, this was a great one i gave you a 5

  • 19 years ago

    by Michael D Nalley

    hi lexi lou
    your poem reminds me of the infatuation i felt for a woman who inpired many poems
    i wrote a villanelle on infatuation it is on this site the title is infatuation

  • 19 years ago

    by Felicia Tursi

    Thankz for commenting my poems 2 and I LOVE yours cute but yet simple their awesome!

Read All Comments (8)

More Poems By Lexi Lou