Please....

by Abbie   Oct 10, 2004


Please let me help you before it's too late
Don't let your death be an early fate
I've tried and I've tried, but you don't want to know
Just tell me what's wrong before i go.
It's not that i don't love you, Or that i don't care.
I just don't know if you want me to be there.
For you each day you push me away,
Not listening to the advice that they say.
Your crying for help, but not getting out of this mindless circle your stuck in.
But I'm getting out without anyone's help.
Crawling away as you drag me in.

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  • 19 years ago

    by Cassie

    very good and emotional writing again! i hope to hear more from you... and i'd be glad if you read some more from me... i'm sure there's something i have written that you would like...

  • 19 years ago

    by Luvmeluvr

    Very well written. I like it alot.

  • 19 years ago

    by Aymon F

    Very nice poem, it flows perfectly, not one flaw. Good job!

  • 19 years ago

    by vanessarrr

    excellent poem. first and last sentence is really good. i liked the flow, too. thanks for the comments. i really appreciate them. take care:)

  • 19 years ago

    by Gracie Jo

    a very nice poem. please keep up the great work and take care! also, thank you for your sweet comment you left me. it means a lot to me! =)

    ~Grace

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