Dieing here(re-submit)

by Molly Elizabeth   Oct 12, 2004


I'm lying here in the dirt,
but you don't care that I'm hurt.
Don't you see I'm dieing?
Don't you care I'm crying?

I sit here in this dark cold corner,
I try to find a place,
where others sympathy doesn't try to wash away my pain.
I just want to cry
leave me alone, I don't care if it kills me, I don't care if I die.

I'm dieing here...
this is my life, it's about to end...
all because you just want to be my friend. I'm dieing here, because you refuse to see, that theres nothing more that I need then you here with me. I'm dieing...

see the blood in my tears? I'm dieing cuz I can't live without you here!

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  • 19 years ago

    by Eibutsina

    WOW Molly

    This poem was so powerful and full of emotion - its rhythm was great and you expressed your feelings so well - hope things are getting better for you hun keep ya head up k?

    Luv And Hugs Eirisa

  • 19 years ago

    by Molly Elizabeth

    thanks!! i apprietiate it!!
    love yas,
    -Mols

    haha i feel so dumb i accidently commented that twice! lol ^^

  • 19 years ago

    by Molly Elizabeth

    i would appretiate your comments! thanks!!

    lots of love,
    -Molly

  • 19 years ago

    by Molly Elizabeth

    i would appretiate your comments! thanks!!

    lots of love,
    -Molly