Broken

by TrUtH hUrTs   Oct 16, 2004


Drifting through a crystal sea,
Of twisting, turning faceless dreams
Blinded by the mist of negativity
I’m tormented.
By the feelings that live inside of me

Furious waves of scarlet regret
Unleash a tempest inside my head
My thoughts are warped, like a twisted maze
I’ve lost sight of myself in this velvet haze

Pattern of hate burnt into my skin
Virile serpent waits patiently within
Cold and bitter, a tarnished soul
I am now, the devil’s own

The knife it beckons..
Like a sliver of wicked moonlight
It mocks my guilty tears
As they tremble in the night

I tear at my flesh in the hope to redefine
The somber loneliness of a dangerous mind
Frozen music of ephemeral love serenades
As the curtains fall for good on this hideous masquerade…

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  • 16 years ago

    by Teria

    ASGDLSGD.
    I loved this poem. It's amazing.
    I think a bit commas, semi-colons, and periods would make it look a bit neater and even out the way the lines are set, but it's amazing.

    5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Sweet lig

    I love the titled its sounds very interesting and it flowed well

    well done

  • 18 years ago

    by Nici

    The imagery in this piece works really well, as I felt myself drawn into the picture by your use of descriptive language.

    Keep writing
    Nici

  • 18 years ago

    by greenmunky

    good poem. i liked it a lot

  • 18 years ago

    by NannO

    wow.. i lyk this poem.. its reli gud, especially that u use those "big words" lol.. ur rhyme was perfect.. gud goin