What Would You Do?

by *tanya*   Oct 21, 2004


What would you do if you knew the way I feel?
What would you do if you couldn't grasp onto something real?
What would you do if no-one understood it at all?
What would you do if you couldn't get past these walls?
What would you do if you could see the world through my eyes?
Would you turn to the knife as well to help silence your cries?
What would you do if your eyes were too tired from crying to see?
What would you do, if you were me?

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  • 19 years ago

    by *tanya*

    wow thank you :D

  • 19 years ago

    by silent submission

    that is a really really great poem girl!your seriously talented and i hope it all goes well for you, people like you in this world deserve all the hapiness there is, good luck, keep writing, and im sure ill comment again coz i relate to most of your stuff. again, your really really talented so keep your chin up and always face the sun so you'll never see the shadows :)

  • 19 years ago

    by *tanya*

    thank you so much! not just for ur comments but for ur support! it means heaps to me.. :D

  • 19 years ago

    by loosing grip

    U r honestly such a good writter. I hav commented on ur stuff a cpl of times b4 (i used to be Lucy) but seriously you r really talented adn u no how 2 express urself. i cant do that, major prob with words, but u make the reader feel emotion and that is a great achievement, Comgratulations. keep ur heap up, keep writtign and u will get thru this

  • 19 years ago

    by xX Toxic Cure Xx

    Nice poem!!! I really like it. And thankx for the comments about mine....:D

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