Some Thing Not True But Is True

by Josiah Larson   Oct 21, 2004


I cant believe you would say this to me
I thought you trusted me

You wont even let me explain
This is just a pain

You put my heart
in so much vain

We were meant to be
We were gonna be
But then you said those words

That tore on me
and wore on me

You say you cant trust me
Because I am a guy

You once Said I was trust worthy
If that was true
How come you said
You don't trust me

Was it some thing I did
or was it some thing you hate

You said you loved me
But I guess thats not true

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  • 18 years ago

    by Kayla

    Aww great job....hope all is okay hun! thankd for the comment on my poem and keep writing bc this is a great job...you truely have talent....luv yas mwah

    -kayla-

  • 18 years ago

    by Kayla

    wow very nicely done....i really liked it...great job...luv yas mwah 5/5

    -kayla-

  • 18 years ago

    by Robiie

    great poem...
    Completely trusting someone is quite hard... But I'm sure deep down she does...
    x0x0

  • 18 years ago

    by Natalie84

    I wanted to come by and say WELCOME TO THE CLUB. And since it's a "poetry" club I figured I'd read a few of your poems.

    This I think is something that every girl or most girls face. After being hurt it's hard for us to move on and trust someone new. That goes away with time. If you love her...stick around and she'll open up.

    I think you should check the definition of "vain" to see if that's the word you really wanted to use or maybe just reword your sentence to make it fit in context.

    "But then you said thoughts words" I didn't understand this line. I couldn't figure out what you were trying to say.

    I’ve enjoyed getting to know you by reading your writing.... :)

  • 18 years ago

    by Krissta

    honey i love you and i do trust you i hope you know that i love you

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