Risking It All.!!!

by Saravana Kumar S   Oct 23, 2004


Every night sitting in the dark you will cry,
looking into the sky you will begin to ask why,
every night you will be put in a battle field,
even after realizing there is nothing to yield.

There will be many ways for you to walk through,
but you will not know which one is for you,
No where to go,you will be stranded alone,
this is one journey u have to walk on ur own.

The pain will not wait,even it will come soon,
feeding ur heart with its venom-spoon by spoon,
even if your heart can't take it any more,
it will not leave until it reaches the core.

Deep inside ur heart,u'll start thinking of dying,
to escape from the pain and stop all the crying,
Suicide may be one of the options you might try,
but soon u'll realize this is not the way to die.

No matter how beautiful love looks from outside,
like the rose there will always be a thorn beside,
making you to realize everything comes at a cost,
if u can afford,you can have me or else get lost.

Love is not a story to understand as you read,
it is an experience where only life can lead,
These things will happen if in love you fall,
If you are ready,you can love "Risking It All.!!!"

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  • 19 years ago

    by Heather

    OMG i geel the same ways! i love this peom!! its great and i dont know i i have read any of ur others but if u have more i want to read them all! im sure just as good!!! Great job!

    ~Heather

  • 19 years ago

    by Jessy

    I realy like this poem it is great good job keep writeing u rock!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

  • 19 years ago

    by Megha

    wow! so true ,so true.
    its a risk..big one.
    great poem!! :-)

  • 19 years ago

    by Gracie Jo

    An excellent poem my friend! I'm sorry about all the confusion as well, but I'm so happy that none of it was true! I knew it had to be wrong... I just knew it! :) I'm so glad you're okay and I hope that you start healing very quickly!!! It's so wonderful to be reading more of your poems again... TRULY AN HONOR!!! Thank you for all of your encouragement, I really can't go into why I've been so upset lately, but just a lot of things have been happening, but it's so great to know that I have people out there who care for me and are here for me - people like you. Thank you so much! You have truly touched my heart!!! Take care of yourself and keep up the great work!

  • 19 years ago

    by Angel Sanctuary ©

    This was an excellent poem... It was awesome... really good... Keep it up
    Angel (changed my name i was Angel Sanctuary)

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