Decided

by Idiosyncratic   Oct 24, 2004


I have decided
I refuse to live
I have been misguided
And have nothing left to give

But I hide it well
No one will ever know
It is too hard to tell
It will never show

I will not go softly
I need to tell someone
Because, apparently
They all think it's fun

They all laugh
Well I just smile
Although it's not real
It will last awhile

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  • 21 years ago

    by Kaitlin Kristina

    This is alot like the last one I commented on. I like this one too. If you added more stanzas it would really make this alot stronger (in my opinion only), because I know that when I finished it I wanted more information.
    With love, K Kristina

  • 21 years ago

    by ŦōüċhÌήğ ỀνĬĽ

    This is really good..I luv the lines:
    I have decided
    I refuse to live
    I have been misguided
    And have nothing left to give
    Very,Very well done...Keep writting..ur really good!
    Shanney

  • 21 years ago

    by KiKi

    good and right to the point

  • 21 years ago

    by Allen

    Short and to the point... In some ways I do relate... but I was a bit confused at the end... this poem flows really well, keep it up :)

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