I just want someone to notice me..

by Chantelle   Oct 25, 2004


And this is what my life consists of
Broken and shattered dreams
I'm trying to hold it all together
But its tearing at the seams

I just wish I had someone to talk to
Someone who understands my pain
Who knows what its like to want to give up on life
Because theres nothing left to gain

No one understands anything about me
Or why I do what I do
Some people ask me why
And I just look to the ground wishing they knew

And if I were to tell you why, I would tell you this:
"I just want someone to notice me
And I want just 1 of my wishes to come true
And I don't like anything about me
If only someone knew..."

And then the rain started falling
From the eyes of a broken heart
"I just want someone to notice me" she said
As her cold, dark world fell apart.

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  • 19 years ago

    by krysten

    hey you think that no one knows how you feel do some surfing on this site i've read so many poems about this kind of thing its unreal and take a look at my poem this is what you do and mutilation of your body it may not be exactly what you're talking about but its similar.

  • 19 years ago

    by DENISE

    HEY, THIS IS A NICE POEM, AND JUST TO LET YOU KNOW THAT EVEN WHEN WE THINK THERE'S NO-ONE THERE TO NOTICE US..THERE WILL BE..THERE PROBABLY IS RIGHT NOW THAT U DON'T KNOW ABOUT, I KNOW HOW YOU FELL BECAUSE ME MYSELF AM IN A DEPRESSION CYCLE AND IF U EVER WANNA TALK ABOUT ANYTHING JUST LEAVE ME A MESSAGE AND I PROMISE I'LL GET BACK AT YOU, I KNOW YOU DON'T KNOW ME BUT TRUST ME I'LL LISTEN AND TRY MY BEST TO HELP YOU OUT.....
    DENISE

  • 19 years ago

    by loosing grip

    this is a good poem, some1 notices u!!!

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