BROKEN TRUST

by xeag   Oct 27, 2004


You act as if no one likes you pretending you are all alone complaining about your lousy parents and your broken home.

I've seen you cut your wrists before shed countless tears of pain, i held you close within my arms and punished those to blame.

I tried my best to be there for you to help and stop your tears, you told me what was wrong and explained to me your fears.

This lasted for a while now all things have changed you say i am two faced now i am the one to blame, for your jealousy, your anger, and your hate filled state before you got mad everything was going great

Now our friendship is broken for I'm sorry is too late.

All because i talk to her all because i am her friend you said you would be there until the very end

Now i see the truth wrapped inside your hate filled lies now i know you were false and only in disguise

You try to make her choose between her boyfriend and best friend then you tell her that you love her and expect it to be the end?

She's picked me before and she'll do it again because shes.... she is a true best friend

PLEASE RATE MY POEM OR WRITE COMMENTS SO I KNOW WHAT TO IMPROVE ~ THANKS

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  • 19 years ago

    by *Sherrie*

    i can totally relate to this poem...in some places it was a little blurry...but a great poem overall...sherrie...

  • They are long lined poems.. that doesn't mean that it is wrong.
    Your poem reflected great emotion and was written well .

    Except the grammar.

    There are lot of mistakes. Please correct it. In the 1st line, it is act not acts.. and it is you are..not your.

    There is lot more. But you find it yourself.

    Don't decrease the beauty of your poem with silly grammar mistakes.

  • 19 years ago

    by WhiSperNcUrsIVe

    i really like it! keep on writing! you are under my favorites now!

  • I like it a lot, you should write it in poem form instead of a paragraph. It makes it look alot better thus bringing attention to it. This peice had great emotion, simply wonderful.
    5/5

  • 19 years ago

    by Andrea

    i like it. the emotions are so real.