Another one lost ©

by LostInLife!   Nov 3, 2004


When you blanked me that night,
My world felt cold once again,
How could you talk to her and my little fricking sister,
But not me!!
Do you even care,
Of the feelings i have.

Then again should i have spoke,
Well i would have done,
If you'd have gave me chance,
But you walked straight past dint even glance,
So i walked away just like you,
But yes i do give a toss i give two,

Did you even know it's been a month,
Yes a whole month you've put up with me,
So maybe it's time that i leave,
Cos it's me thats stood here,
Staring back at that empty space,
where you walked through,
Same old thing just a different place.

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  • 19 years ago

    by ShadowedPhoenix

    I liked the way you expressed your anger in this one it's sad and it kinda makes every1 else hate him! Good job and keep it up:)

  • 19 years ago

    by Abbie

    I like the way you have portrayed your feelings!! your a good writer, i've read a few of your other poems and i must say i was quite impressed!! keep up the good work! xxx

  • 19 years ago

    by DooDee

    really nice poem :D keep up the good work !! and thanx alot for commenting my poem ! and here i am commenting urs ! just like i promised ! take care and bye

  • 19 years ago

    by Ten Feet Tall

    Nice job:) It really is sad though, but you put this into words so well. I also really liked your other one you had me look at, I think it was called In My Dreams. Great job and thanks for looking at my poems.

    Ten Feet Tall

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