Abuse

by Tonaysia   Nov 6, 2004


Before you read this I wanted you to know that this poem is not about me. It s about my friend, Ariel and her ex-boyfriend. So i hope you like it!

IT was the best relationship i ever had until you started making me sad
You used to beat me like your child my friends thought I should leave alone for a while
But i couldn't go, i don't know, I just loved you so
Maybe it was the way you made me feel your soft gentle touch just gave me the chills
I loved the way you made me smile but putting your hands on me was just foul
You used to kick me and punch me in my stomach I remember seeing your face you just loved it
You used to slap me in my face and throw me to the floor you used to beat me until I got sore
One day you hit me and called me a whhore that's when i knew I couldn't take it any more so I walked out the door
Now i have a real man that loves me and he would never ever put his hands on me

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  • 19 years ago

    by Tonaysia

    thanx very much 4 the comments tell some of your friends to read it so i can get more comments

  • This is sad..but well written..keep writting^_^!

  • 19 years ago

    by jennifer

    This was an amazing poem, you have great talent.

  • 19 years ago

    by Taylor

    hey great poem i love it ! it's really sad and that stuff happens a lot and it's horrible keep it up!

    Love, Taylor