Till my last breathe

by olivia   Nov 12, 2004


When we first got together we fell so deeply in love
I knew from the start our love was a gift from God above

We've been through so many good times, the laughs, jokes, smiles, you make me feel beautiful even when I'm a mess and when my face is covered with tears
its cause of these reasons and so many more that i know were stand the test of time through the years

You've affected my life in so many ways, you see who i am and who i can be
you respect and understand me and love me for just me

Even after all this time when we kiss my eyes close, my head spins, my heart races and you take my breathe away
since that very first day i knew you were the one, the one i wanted in my life everyday

So i guess what I'm saying is, there is no other that can make me feel this way
your my lover, my best friend, my husband I will love you with every breathe i take till my dying day.

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  • 19 years ago

    by Lydia O

    You really write straight from the heart, so pure and sincere. Your words truly capture the essence of love. Good work.

  • 19 years ago

    by ChildofGod87

    Sara, this piece was so passionate and very loving:) I loved it.. 5/5.. Keep it up;D Check some of mine:).. Take Care...

    ~!~Love grows all the time~!~

  • 19 years ago

    by jennifer

    Very wonderful poem Olivia and thank-you for commenting on mine greatly appreciated

  • 19 years ago

    by Jose Herrera

    good job

  • 19 years ago

    by Johnny Marlin 2

    Excellent poem. Keep on writing... p.s. check out mine if you have a chance

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