Dead

by Ashleigh   Nov 12, 2004


The end is near,
can't u hear?
I thought u could see my pain,
I feel like im going insane.
Someone please help me,
I don't care who,
I wish there is something
That someone could do.
I've felt this way
For years and years,
All the time i brake down in tears.
I don't know why
I always cry,
I feel like people
Want me to die.
I feel so useless
And also sad,
All the things that u do
Make me mad.
I have to die,
Its the only way,
I've made up my mind
And tomorrow is my last day.
I thought i could deal with it,
But i only felt like I was falling into a dark cold pit.
Just let me die anyway i want
And don't try to stop me,
I thought u would know
That i don't want to be.
People were just pushing me around Like i wasn't even there,
I've always known that they don't care..

My insides are hollow; filled with strife.
But now it's time to end my life.
You could suggest an alternative instead,
But it's too late, I'm already...Dead.

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  • 21 years ago

    by Idiosyncratic

    pretty good poem, especially when read in your head, but when you read it aloud there are some parts that could be improved; like when you put:

    I feel so useless
    And also sad,

    instead of and also sad, you could put

    I feel so useless
    I feel so sad

    or

    I feel so useless
    And all so sad

    that's really the only part that needed improving, in my opinion, anyways, don't change if anything if you like it the way it is, great job with your poem!

  • 21 years ago

    by Ashleigh

    thanx!

  • 21 years ago

    by UM

    My insides are hollow; filled with strife.
    But now it's time to end my life.
    You could suggest an alternative instead,
    But it's too late, I'm already...Dead.

    Thats my little ending for ya! Kinda cheery doncha think? Feel free to use it if you like it or change it or whatever. Keep up the good work.

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