Only Cure..

by Armed-Alcoholic   Nov 14, 2004


Come in here mother,
Don't be scared.
I have something
I have to share.

Shut the door,
Don't turn around,
What you see,
May make you frown.

Why were you never
There for me?
Doesn't matter,
Just look at me bleed.

I was never
Good enough,was I?
You can tell me,
Don't be shy.

I wasn't like my siblings,
That's for sure.
So I guess to kill myself,
Is my only cure.

ugh.... sorry so crappy, writers block i think

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  • 19 years ago

    by So-Not-Normal

    i thought it was great!!! and you better not use death as a cure cuz it will just cause more pain to the ppl who need u here!! and poem writing is a excellent cure to!!!

  • 19 years ago

    by Armed-Alcoholic

    sarah, thanks for the critism, ill try to fix it up and i wont as i promised
    love from nick
    -UnImportant

  • 19 years ago

    by Not Bulletproof

    amazing poem love...it's really good...jsut one piece of critism (or however you spell it...) you should make it a little longer, if possible...but no worries....it's really marvelous...take care hun love you

    -Mortalidaga
    xxTakeCarexx

    ps. And you better not use death as a cure.....xxxx

  • 19 years ago

    by Andrea

    oh thats sad! very good poem though.

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