Hidden feelings

by ElegantlyWasted   Nov 15, 2004


Broken
Shattered
Shes torn apart

Falling
Misery
He took her heart

Lifeless
Neurotic
Shes leaving now

Tempted
Faint
He killed her somehow

Wrecked
Abused
She lays dead

Breathless
Pain
He haunted her head

Lies
Deciet
She is gone

Screaming
Silence
He loved her all along

* I don't know what this is about, It's a bunch of words and emotions that describe.....who knows *

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  • 19 years ago

    by Jacklyn

    hey it's really cool, like you said few words but still i got the message and the message is the important part of the poem least in my oppinion!

    ~lil slam~

  • 19 years ago

    by ZenZi

    This poem makes sense to me! It's different, very deep, there's no pause, and it flows well.