Look at me

by ElegantlyWasted   Nov 16, 2004


Look at me now, I'm broken
Do you laugh at what you see?
Is your conscience clear now
That you've got rid of me

Look at me now, I'm cutting
Do you feel at all sad?
Are you starting to care now
Because I've gone completely mad

Look at me now, I'm falling
Will you smile and wave?
Can you feel my presence now
Because your love you never gave

Look at me now, I'm fading
Can you put on a happy face?
Is your mind at ease now
Because you've left me in this place

Look at me now, I've lost
But are you still my friend?
Do you regret saying those things
Not all things have to end

Look at me now, I'm Dying
Are you watching me close my eyes?
Do you want to say something
Maybe it's time to apologize

Look at me now, I'm Gone
I can see you standing there!
I really want to reach out and touch you
But you don't even realize I'm here

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  • 19 years ago

    by Jacklyn

    only 4.5 come on this is better then that, well i givin it a five i really like this poem about how some people just can't say sorry or let go of things it's sad but well writen!

    take care, lol i'm doing this and hw at the same time!

    ~lil slam~