I will be true

by spunk   Nov 17, 2004


Follow the foot steps to my heart
and i will show you what bliss is about
running through the journeys in my life
hoping that someday i will be a wife
watching the barricades come down
praying someday you will wipe my frown

the flowers grow
the water will flow
the sun will rise
and the owl will still be wise

running my fingers through the creases of your heart
your love, your warmth has left a mark
you have opened your eyes
and made me realize
forever i will be yours and you will be mine
we will forever last till the end of time
holding your hands as we gracefully fly
touching her stars, as you place one in my eye
jumping off the cliff and plunge into the sea
you stare into my eyes as you come closer to me
you whisper such soft words in my ear
such words as, " I love you dear"

i miss you so much and i know i will never see you
you have now moved on, but my love is still true

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  • 19 years ago

    by Johnny Marlin 2

    Excellent poem, and thank you for the comments. As for ways to improve... The First two paragraph's were excellent and flowed nicely, the last sectiion it seemed like the rhyming was a little forced, remember, poems don't have to rhyme. Also, pay attention to syllables in a sentence, the poems will be smoother if the sentences are even or close. Hope I helped, regardless, it was an amazing poem. Please keep reading and writing. take care