Forever Alone

I don't like this one very much. It isn't very poetic and really just a jumble of feelings in my opinion but please tell me what you think, would mean a lot.

If people cry when people die,
Does that mean someone is crying for me?
Cause I'm dying inside.

Or am i alone in the tears that i shed?
No one else cries for me,
I'm alone, wishing i were dead.

Can someone please try and understand?
All on my own, i just can't,
Confusion seeps in.

All the open wounds and the scars on my skin,
They let pain and depression come sinking in,
It swallows me whole.

Cruel words shatter me into a thousand pieces,
Each one of those pieces,
Still aches with pain.

Slowly cutting myself apart,
I'm breaking at the seams,
I'm falling.

I'm falling into darkness and i can't find light,
Dragging my life behind,
As i weep.

I weep in tears and i weep in blood,
It hurts and pains as it drains from me,
My life.

I'm dying but I'm still alive,
Why should i carry this corpse around?
No longer.

To you it seems like i sulk when i cry,
You don't understand that I'm planning my goodbye,
Alone.

No one to say goodbye to, for no one cares,
And as i hang here, dying,
I'm forever alone.

*All comments and votes greatly appreciated as always*