Why?

by Danny   Nov 18, 2004


Why does no one care?
What have i done
To make them hate me?
I do nothing
Say nothing
But i am an outsider
Alone in the world
No one to care for me
Save me
Please
Does no one care for me
Am i so different
From the rest of you?
Why?
Why am i alone in the world?

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  • 19 years ago

    by ~*BlueBerryBtch*~

    u should know that theres always someone out there feeeling the same way u do, dont ever think that ur alone, u are never alone as cocky as that sounds, i used to feel the same way, but i got through and u can get through it too if u still feel the same way. its good that ur expressing the way u feel good job keep it up

  • 19 years ago

    by Renee Murdock

    Danny you are a good writer but i think the reason people dont comment very high on your poems is cause they dont ryme and that is so stupid...i loved the message in your poem and i feel like that sometimes. Mostly all the poems that are good and that have high ratings all ryme and that is so crazy cause there are some really good poems that dont ryme at all...by the way i was so happy to see that i am under your favorite writers on your profile...and did you know that kelly is my cousin...i guess poetry runs in the family huh...lol...take care...peace
    Renee

  • 19 years ago

    by miss scooby

    I liked this poem a lot you did a great job writing this and sometimes i wish i had the answers to everything but a lot of us go through life not knowing why...i being one of those people. But hold your head up and instead of asking why, live life to the fullest and smile.
    take care always
    Scooby

  • 19 years ago

    by Danny

    thank you everyone