Who Loves Me?

by aDORKable x3   Nov 21, 2004


With an eye out on thee
and a heart that's for me.
I feel your love for me,
that's as true as can be.

You make me fell happy.
Really happy, you see?
You're the only person I know
that loves me for me.

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  • 16 years ago

    by Jaymes Haze

    It was quite the loving poem.
    Although I wonder how it would've been if you coulda made the third line in the second stanza rhyme like the rest.

  • 17 years ago

    by xxmichaelxx

    Really cute....like always......this reminds me of someone.......i feel sad....lol.

    xxleisaxx

  • 18 years ago

    by Paige aka Kayla

    He must be really special if he chose you over his parents! And he also must be brave!
    I loved the poem! Its great!
    i give it 5/5!
    I just registered so i havnt got any poems yet! But when i do id really appriciate it if you comment on them aswell!
    Great poem! Love always Paige!
    p/s! Please check out my friends poems! There awsome! She's been Suspended at the moment but she should be back soon! Her name is Kaya "I wonder" is a great poem she wrote! So if you'd be so kind as to when she returns! Please check it out!
    Thanx!
    Love Paige
    xoxoxoxoxo

  • 19 years ago

    by aDORKable x3

    Please comment
    thanx =)