No Longer (SJ)

by Superior Jackson   Jun 21, 2003


When the roses are not red
and the violets are not blue
Everything we said
seems to be no longer true

When the sun doesn't shine
and the moon isn't bright
Everything we felt
is no longer right

When the sky turns gray
and the grass loses it's green
All that we shared
is no longer what it seems

When hell is on this earth
and the Heavens fall from above
What's stored in our hearts
is no longer love

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  • 17 years ago

    by Hatori

    I loved how you rhymed and your poem was so good. It hold a lot of truth as well. Keep on writing, 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by Sondos

    Wow! My jaw dropped reading this. It was absoloutely incredible. Beautifully orginally. The rhyming was spot on and it just flowed so well.
    Well Done
    Sondos

  • 18 years ago

    by sarah

    Beautiful poem
    the last stanza was perfect for this ending awsome job 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by Superior Jackson

    Thanks!!

  • 18 years ago

    by Superior Jackson

    Thanks!!

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