~Truth~

by Janine   Nov 26, 2004


I heard the story
I saw the proof
I realised your lie
I found out the truth

Not a word
Not even a cry
Just a thousand tears
Enough to die

TO tell the truth
To trust you forvever
To find out your lie
To forgive you
NEVER

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  • 19 years ago

    by creasy

    great poem!! nicely written!! keep it up!! and thanks for thre comment!!

  • 19 years ago

    by ♥x__Pwincess danii//

    janine style is hot and dont bag it out or i will get my mates on to ya

  • 19 years ago

    by Janine

    wat the hells with ur "intelligent" wordin i hav no idea wat u mean .Im onli 13....and i think my style of writins preety gud

  • 19 years ago

    by RyanSmith

    I see here that you are trying to refine your style here. Your keep the sharpness and twists and turns but I think that you have over did it here. You toned that great eye for sharpness down a little too much and the subject matter and mood suffered. I suggest that you buy a book on style and structure for poems. There are terms and devices that you used in poetry that if you looked into them I think would help you a great deal. Keep writing you have a great raw talent!

  • 19 years ago

    by Janine

    its okies dokies