Thin Red Lines

by redscream   Dec 3, 2004


Deeper, harder
It carries me away
All the pain washes out
I go to neverneverland
Everything bad drains away
It drips on the floor in a puddle
All the bad leaves my body
But I must clean it up
I do every time
No one can know
It will come again
Then it will be deeper and longer
and messier
Over and over again
These thin red lines appear
They go away
Just like everything else...

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  • 19 years ago

    by Kia

    good poem, i know the feeling, great job

  • 19 years ago

    by Ashlee Nicole

    I like it girly..This must be the one that's like mine then..I see I see..
    Ohh yeah When you gonna spend the night?>-Ash-<

  • 19 years ago

    by Amy~Lynn

    Wow...i rly lykes it...and i can rly relate 2 it. Stay strong and keep writing! And plz try to read all of my poems and comment on them...tht means a lot...Much Luv, .:.Amy~Lynn.:.

  • 19 years ago

    by ~*Missing Them Already*~

    Wow...that was really well written...it made me think of myself. Keep writing...and try to always look up. Hope you're doing okay!
    Love Always,
    Sammy
    xoxoxo

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