Into My Wrist...I Took My Own Life

by WhiSperNcUrsIVe   Dec 13, 2004


Into my wrists the knife will seep
I suddenly realize it’s much too deep
People around me start to weep
The pains so horrid I cannot sleep
As I’m slowly starting to die
Of all the time I start to cry
And all the times you did not try
And all the times you had to lie
The pain is going through my mind
How could I have been so blind?
And as my teeth sill start to grind
I wait until gods mind will speak
As I’m lying here so very weak
The blood is rushing down my arm
Like my own heart was, with his charm
And as the pain will just subside
I just committed suicide

Brandy 2004 ©

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  • 19 years ago

    by Sweet Lullabies

    wow that was really good, i loved how well it flows!

  • 19 years ago

    by vanessarrr

    well done. i loved how the poem goes into such great detail of how he slowly dies and how it all ends. very well written. keep writing! take care:)

  • 19 years ago

    by R

    i love it... good job