Theres Blood on the floor

by Danielle Riddle   Dec 14, 2004


There's blood on the floor
And the baby is crying
My heart was taken captive
My restless body is slowly dying

I have a date with depression
But it arrived to early you see
For I am only 10 years old
I'm still developing my dreams

I was given a responsibility
Much to big for my age
It locked me away from the world
I live my life within this cage

Praying for a way out
But this life is all I know
If my heart was ever freed
It wouldn't know where to go

Would it fly to the right things
My heart has now been taught
Or would if lead me to the bad things
That my heart has already fought

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  • 19 years ago

    by happy days

    wow... that wsa really good but also really sad, keep up the good work nd if u can cn u comment on mine? thanks

  • 19 years ago

    by Dark Savior

    very good poem, i now remember why i added you to my favorites. your a gifted writer with a unique perspective on life.

    there are a few spell mistakes....

    Would if fly to the right things *i think if=it*

    Theres is suppose to be there is, or There's....imagine me giving out grammer lessons who woulda thunk it.

    But all in all an amazing poem.
    Five/Five

  • 19 years ago

    by karley

    good poem thanx for adding me to your favorites hey you wanna email me ny email addy is yellow_bus92@hotmail.com

  • 19 years ago

    by Driver

    awesome poem... i can relate to this poem perfectly... keep up the good writting...
    -sk8er101-

  • 19 years ago

    by twisted faith

    gr8 poem, kindda depressing that things like this really happen though, keep up the gd work

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