Shadowland

by Your eyeliner is laughable   Dec 14, 2004



This place is not good,
This place is not right,
The darkness holds terrors,
I'm alone in the night.
Wind whips my hair,
Tears the skin from my face,
And yet I enjoy it,
I guess its personal taste,
I see bundles of flowers,
Lillies so white,
They're all that I see,
Like ghosts in the night,
The grass is so dark,
And the sky is so black,
I'm following a path,
And I cannot turn back,
The colours are fading,
Further away,
Forever alone,
In this place I'll stay,
I come to a halt,
In front of a wall,
Its stands like a shroud,
And oh so tall,
I guess I should climb it,
I don't have a choice,
I try to protest,
The wind steals my voice,
I conquer the wall,
Now I see a tree,
And high in its branches,
A glittering key.
Maybe the key,
Will show me the way,
Out of this shadow land,
And into the day,
I fall to my knees,
Moaning in pain,
My heart hangs in tatters,
Just to entertain,
Something falls from the sky,
But its not rain,
Droplets of red,
Straight from the vein,
Will I ever escape?
No not a chance,
Because I'm stuck in my head,
And I'm making myself dance.
Forever,
In misery.

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  • 16 years ago

    by Crimson Princess

    This is a great poem. it flows well and i think that you have a great talent foe writing so keep the good work up and i would like to see more from you...
    -C.P.-

  • 19 years ago

    by Angel of Broken Dreams

    Wow. Totally awesome. I loved it.

  • 19 years ago

    by Jennifer

    That was great, I like that creepy like me. Kepp on writing.

    Jennifer:) aka Craze

  • 19 years ago

    by goot

    Seriously love it. So vivid and alive you make the words dance in my head and show me a world of secrets and darkness. You portray everything so exactly. Nothing could begin to explain how good this poetry is. It put a world in my lead. I love it. Do it again!!! lol great work!

  • 19 years ago

    by MeLiSsA M

    Good poem!! i liked it a lot great work!!

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